The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/14
This was a beautiful read with a powerful message.

Loved it.

God bless~
I love this story. I think it is a brilliant example of how easy it is for others to judge without knowing the full story. The only red ink I have would be to maybe not allude that the kind stranger was an angel. It's not that I don't believe an angel might intervene in that situation because I do. The mysterious stranger is a literary device that can be overused. Personally I'd have loved it if the lady turned into a good friend because of the situation. I will say though, you never stated she was an angel and even if that was your intention, this story is one of the best mysterious stranger stories I've ever read. You really grabbed my heart with this piece from beginning to end. You also did a wonderful job of infusing the topic throughout the story.
05/29/14
Congratulations!
God bless~