The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/14
Wow - what a pentrating and intense read. So much raw emotion. An excellent job with the this weeks topic, and you brought the MC to life. I felt her pain, and saw her perfectly as you described the scenes.

Well done. I loved the wrap-up, tying it all together so well.

Excellent!

God bless~
05/12/14
Throughout all the emotion and the pain that came across in your piece Grandmother's voice was loud and clear. This was well-written and the reader was able to identify with what you were experiencing.
Exquisite.
05/15/14
Congrats JK!

It's getting to be commonplace seeing you in the winner's circle! Great job, once again...

God bless~
Wonderful storytelling . . .

Congratulations!
Hebrews 10:26-31 KJV