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I can't believe no one has commented on this piece yet. It is truly wonderful, and touches the heart. It has the ring of a true story about it, did you, or a loved one experience this?
Thank you for sharing, and God bless,

Kevin
11/23/05
Very nice!! I loved the way you built his anxiety and the good ending.:)
11/25/05
Ah the prodigal son returns.. a beautifully touching story, and well written. Very good job..
Beautifully written. A lovely modern-day prodigal son story. We all knew his dad would take him back (LOL) but you did a great job building the tension. Well done.
11/26/05
You had me in suspense in the beginning, and I had to hang in there to find out the great ending. Nice work. God bless ya, littlelight
11/26/05
The Prodigal Son with a twist :) I enjoyed reading this.
11/26/05
Loved this!
11/27/05
Very touching with hints of the Prodigal Son parable. Excellent job with the interplay between father and daughter. Kid's say the darndest things!! =)