The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/14
Very well written entry. A lot of material presented in a very interesting perspective. Nicely done!

God bless~
03/10/14
I would have preferred if you had concentrated on the one family, rather than make it general and abstract. However, your point(s) is (are) well taken. A well-written article nevertheless.
03/11/14
It’s a good story about life. Although I got lost in the story, I assume you were talking about the same person. It would gave the girl a name it might be easier to follow.