The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/14
Well written story and certainly on topic.

Thank you.

God bless~
03/11/14
Interesting. I like that it is in first person POV. I would have liked to have seen more of his description and reaction of the rapture - more shock, grief, remorse?
You're on the right track. Keep writing. You'll get it.