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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Winter (11/14/05)

TITLE: One Child at a Time
By Garnet Miller
11/20/05


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Elisabeth took a sip from the steaming cup of coffee. With the arrival of the chilliest season of the year, her heart ached. Over the past week, she visited sixty percent of her case children.

“I can’t do this anymore, Lord,” she lamented, alone in her car. “I wanted to help the children the way someone helped me. But, I can’t rescue them all.”

One day, one child, she heard the Spirit say.

The orphanage seemed to rise out of the snowy landscape. Ice-covered branches glistened in the morning sun. Holly berries sparkled like jewels and deer drank from the stream flowing under the bridge Elisabeth traveled. Her eyes drank in the peaceful scene.

She rolled to a stop in front of St. Catherine’s Home for Children. Opening the top folder in her stack, she read the name: Parker Sullivan, age ten.

“Great, another young face to smile into that doesn’t realize I can’t help him,” she thought.

At the door, she met a woman in her mid-fifties, wearing the traditional black habit.

“Are you the social worker, Elisabeth Warren?” the nun said.

Elisabeth nodded.

“I’m Sister Rebecca,” she said, extending a hand. “Welcome to St. Catherine’s.”

The cavernous hallway reminded Elisabeth of a gothic cathedral. At the end of the corridor, they turned right and entered a dormitory wing.

“How long has he been here?”

“About a year or so—since the accident,” Sister Rebecca said.

“Which room?”

Sister Rebecca pointed towards the end of the hall. “His is the last one on the left.”

Elisabeth knocked and opened the door. A dark-haired boy sat on the floor reading a book. Elisabeth sat down in one of the chairs surrounding an oval table.

“Parker, my name is Elisabeth. I’m here to—”

“I know why you’re here,” he said.

“Tell me, then,” she said.

“You came to see if I like it here.”

“And, do you…like it here?” Elisabeth asked.

“Have you read The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe?” Parker held up his book.

“Yes I have,” she said.

“It’s like that here. The White Witch made it always winter but never Christmas.”

Confused, she kept silent and let him continue.

“In winter, everything’s pretty, but cold. Christmas makes things warm. It’s cold here.”

“Aren’t the nuns friendly?”

“They mean well and they talk about God and Jesus, but I don’t understand any of it.”

Elisabeth smiled. “It is Jesus’ birth that makes Christmas so special.”

Parker put down his book. A spark of interest leapt into his eyes. She proceeded to tell him the Christmas story.

“Does God’s forgiveness include the man who burned our house and killed my mom?”

Elisabeth bit her lip and silently prayed for guidance. “Yes, Parker, it includes him, too—if he wants forgiveness. When we say we are sorry to God, He forgives us and shows us how to become better people.”

“How old do you have to be to ask for forgiveness? I haven’t been too good lately for Sister Rebecca.”

“You can ask Him right now.”

“Can God help me stop hating the man who took my mother away?” A tear slid down his cheek.

Elisabeth touched his hands. “Yes—one day at a time, Parker.”

She closed the door behind her when she left. A pain in her soul coveted every step that led her away from his door. Sister Rebecca met her in the corridor.

“Has there been any interest in adopting Parker?” Elisabeth asked.

“I’d like to say yes, but the reality is that Parker has ‘aged out’ of the range that couples want to adopt. He may be with us for the duration.”


* * * *

Parker placed the last ornament on the tree.

“Now what are we going to do?” he asked with enthusiasm.

“How about choosing a book and we’ll read together?”

He did not reach for his book, but grabbed the book on the coffee table and handed it to Elisabeth.

“Can you read the Jesus Christmas story to me?”

Now it was Elisabeth’s turn to shed a tear.

“I’m glad they let me spend Christmas with you.” Parker leaned on her shoulder.

She glanced at the papers tucked beside her. “This is only the beginning.”

Renewed purpose entered her life through a boy named Parker Sullivan. The love Elisabeth felt could be lavished upon many children. God had shown her the way—one child at a time.


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Shelley Snyder11/22/05
What a tender story. I liked the descriptions you used for the scenery as well as the hallway. Good job.
Venice Kichura11/24/05
Beautiful story!
Pat Guy 11/25/05
I knew where the story was headed but still teared up - good job on how it was told!
Laurie Glass11/25/05
What a lovely story - touches the heart. And a great reminder that in whatever we do, it's one step at a time.
Julianne Jones11/25/05
Beautifully told. Especially liked the reference to always winter but never Christmas and the picture it conveyed. Good job.
Nina Phillips11/25/05
So far, this is one of my favorite stories. I loved how God works in mysterious ways to bring us the warmth of Christmas. Really nice work. God bless ya, littlelight
Shari Armstrong 11/26/05
This one gave me chills. Having had a lot of foster kids in the child care program where I used to work, I could recognize Parker and the heartache. I always felt like I couldn't do enough -and some of the kids had asked me to adopt them, but of course I couldn't. Well done!
Sandra Petersen 11/27/05
What a jewel of an entry! The 4th paragraph was so descriptive that I could see the orphanage in my mind. Excellent dialogue! How many people choose an occupation because of something in their background that creates the desire to help. How sad that there is an age limit to love for an adopted child. Good job!
Debbie Sickler11/28/05
I liked the reference to cold winter without the warmth of Christmas. I also really liked that you ended it with them spending Christmas together with the adoption still pending. Didn't make it seem like such a jump from just meeting to being family. Nice job.
Ellena Balkcom01/20/06
This is my first comment, as I am a new member! What great, descriptive writing. May God continue to bless your gift!


   
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