The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/05
The BEST description of winter I've read so far! It's short, which I like - and paints a vivid picture of the subject...WINTER. Thanks
11/24/05
A vivid description. Well worded, and ever flow through out... Well done.
11/24/05
Nicely descriptive. Senses of those in the snow would have made it even better.
11/24/05
A very psalm-like piece - well done!
11/24/05
Very nice descriptions. Well done.
11/24/05
This is really good! I love the progression of this and the absolutely lovely ending! Well done! :)
Great descriptive piece. I could picture it so vividly even though our winters are obviously milder. Good work.
I really liked the line about the poplars baring their skin unashamedly and the daggers dripping on unsuspecting victims. Really nice imagery. Good job!
11/25/05
How nice! I guess winter is a time of rest and hibernation for the earth. And, how beautiful it is!
11/25/05
Lovely and descriptive. A time for everything.
Nice post. God bless ya, littlelight
11/26/05
Oh, how pretty! Anytime someone can make me think winter is lovely (I hate it), they've done a masterful piece of writing. Bravo!
11/28/05
Bravo! Such energy, such description and short enough to hold my attention ;)
11/29/05
Great work! I had to put a sweater on after I read this... You have a very vivid brush that you paint with... look forward to reading more of your work.