The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/14
Amen! Beautiful closing to a powerful story. Great job.

God bless~
02/28/14
I loved this description of David: "pint sized, rosy cheeked, curly headed youngster..." I loved this line as well, "As he passed from life into death, I guess he never knew what hit him.."

Just a note, and I could be wrong, but I don't think you need a period after 1st when you say 1st Samuel.

This was a wonderful story. Not too preachy. Just right.

02/28/14
Loved it and the descriptive style you used!!!
03/06/14
Congratulations!

God bless~