The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/14
Wonderful story about what really matters in life.

In the first line, it should read "Matt reasoned..." Also keep an eye out for typos such as "tof" instead of "of" about halfway through. They sneak up on writers as we're editing--we only see what we think we see sort of thing.

I found Alistair's character quite amusing. I always have a soft spot for the old codger's and you wrote him well.
02/28/14
A very well crafted story with many multi-layered messages and meanings.

Really well done.

God bless~
03/04/14
You need to read over your work, even more than once. A very interesting lesson on what is truly important and the characters are realistic. The presentation is just marred a bit by a few grammatical errors or typos.