The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/14
I loved this creative piece!
Great work!

God bless~
02/24/14
Super creative, believable dialogue, and a great message woven within. Well done.
02/24/14
This is a very creative take on this week's topic. It was very on theme too!

I don't have any red ink to offer, but in Jan's writing class for this week she recommended against starting a piece with dialogue. It can make readers feel like they're walking in on a conversation. You might find the lesson very interesting.

I look forward to reading your entry for next week. Great job on creating a fun story with a deep message.
02/25/14
Very creative and thought-provoking. Your point about needing to come to the end of ourselves is so true.
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