The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/14
Clever and riveting. Unique approach to the topic at hand.

Good job.

God bless~
02/25/14
Clever take on the topic - action throughout and a message we need to be reminded of.

Dialogue felt a little unnatural - maybe try saying it out loud to help make it flow.

I wonder what I would do in their place. Thought-provoking piece.
02/27/14
Congratulations!

God bless~