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02/20/14
Very powerful stuff. I really enjoyed this and loved the tiny glimmers of humor int he story such as this line "The 'shut down the motor before the engine explodes' light flashed. "

Well done.
02/22/14
Absolutely outstanding story...I enjoyed this from beginning to end. WOnderful messages throughout.

God bless~
02/25/14
This story was very enjoyable to read, and it's a clever approach to the topic.

Your great dialogue really drew me into the story, but the paragraph that starts: "Lisa and Terrance Sterling were experiencing..." felt a little out of place in the middle of the story.

I enjoyed your sense of humour, and my favourite part is when Lisa sees the sign. Great story! I look forward to reading more of your work.

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