The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/14
I'm embarrassed by how long it took me to realize you were speaking of Job. ;)

I enjoyed this different POV of his story. It was a very timely reminder for me to remember I could have it a whole lot worse.
02/22/14
Good job with the familiar story of JOB...I liked how you presented it.

God bless~
You did a fine job of describing Job. I did pick up fairly quickly that Job was the MC, but it didn't affect how much I liked the story. Your descriptions were fantastic, making me see and even smell as I read. You did switch from the past to present tense here and there, but I was so engrossed in your message if I haven't been doing a great deal of editing lately, I doubt I would even notice it. You covered the topic in a great way. You brought the Bible story to life in a way that really touched my heart. Kudos on a job well done.
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