The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/05
Very nice story! I felt as though I were there. The only thing I might consider changing is rejecting HIM not it..just a thought. I love stories of salvation. Thanks:)
11/24/05
A well done step back in time. I like the way you ended it not knowing if he made it back home or not.
You've captured the time and setting well. So pleased that Russ was saved before he went back out on that battlefield. Good job.
11/25/05
I liked this story very much. I felt as though I was right there with the writer. God bless ya, littlelight
11/26/05
Very good job of capturing the loneliness and desolation of war, and then giving us (and your protagonist) hope.
11/27/05
Very touching story. War is a terrible place for men to die. As long as the Savior is there, they do not have to die alone. God, visit our men and women overseas. Protect them and fill their hearts with Your love and peace. Amen.