The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/05
A great lesson!! Well done!
A lovely story. Requires some minor editing (speech marks, that type of thing) but otherwise well written.
Good message! I ejoyed this.
11/25/05
I really loved this coldish heart moving story, and how the Lord helped break the ice. Good lesson for us all-about the ant. God bless ya, littlelight
I liked your entry overall, but you might want to consider breaking up the third paragraph. It felt like you were trying to tell us too much info all at once. I think that might help this flow better. Other than that, nice job.
11/26/05
Good job! One minor correction: "beck and call" instead of "beckoned call." Loved the way you portrayed your protagonist so realistically.
11/27/05
Your application of the verse impacted me. Thank you for writing!
11/27/05
God always provided everything we need to do His will in every situation. The situation in this story exemplifies that. Thanks for sharing:)