The Official Writing Challenge
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A great lesson!! Well done!
A lovely story. Requires some minor editing (speech marks, that type of thing) but otherwise well written.
Good message! I ejoyed this.
I really loved this coldish heart moving story, and how the Lord helped break the ice. Good lesson for us all-about the ant. God bless ya, littlelight
I liked your entry overall, but you might want to consider breaking up the third paragraph. It felt like you were trying to tell us too much info all at once. I think that might help this flow better. Other than that, nice job.
Good job! One minor correction: "beck and call" instead of "beckoned call." Loved the way you portrayed your protagonist so realistically.
Your application of the verse impacted me. Thank you for writing!
God always provided everything we need to do His will in every situation. The situation in this story exemplifies that. Thanks for sharing:)