The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting read. Would be ab excellent devotion, as it is filled with Godly advice for all.
Good flow to your writing.
I enjoyed reading this.
Not often we get to write our own Eulogy:)
Good lesson presented in this story poem.

Even though the lines were of different length, it did not seem to make the reading difficult.

The good direction is a settled belief in Jesus which leads to obedient baptism for the forgiveness of sin so a person receives the gift of the Holy spirit.
I really like this piece. It brought a touch of tears to my eyes. I wasn't sure how you were fitting the topic in at first, then I saw it. What a clever take! I'm picture horse head bookends and love the way you took an interesting play on the words. It was quite clever.
02/12/14
Length of lines make no difference in poetry. We write with license. It is the rhythm, the flow, each word that counts. Moving and instructional. Great job.