The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/14
Wow! Very Powerful!
I especially like the last stanza. You said so much - without spelling it out.
Great writing!
02/04/14
Beautifully done.

God bless~
02/04/14
This was beautiful. I love the simplicity of it and especially how you managed to fit so much emotion into so few words. The last verse is really powerful.

Thank you so much for sharing this!
02/05/14
Nice poem. Very subtle, yet a good message. We are left to ponder the "presence". Leaving that presence open to interpretation (who?) may satisfy more readers, yet for me, I would hope it to be more clear that it is God.

Good stuff though. Keep submitting entries!