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02/02/14
You might consider writing curriculum for your church's Sunday School department or Junior church. One suggestion is that children might not relate to the idea of people "falling into decay", but overall the lesson is well-written and conveys the biblical account in an easy to follow format.
02/04/14
I love the story of Noah.
Since it's a familiar story, try to find a creative approach to retelling it. Maybe you could use a different point of view or focus on one character.
This would be a great children's story.
02/04/14
A totally sweet and delightful read. I think all ages will enjoy this entry.
Thank you.

God bless~
02/05/14
I agree with previous reviewer. With a little tweaking, this could be an excellent children's lesson.

Great job!