The Official Writing Challenge
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Your easy writing style and gift with dialog made this a refreshing read. Excellent!
01/25/14
This was beyond excellent, it was superb in deliver and content, and I simply loved it!

God bless~
01/26/14
Lovely story! Be sure to share it with your Christian Ed. dept. at church - this would be perfect to read to a group of kids in SS class or Junior Church to make the bible story come to life. Great job!
I loved your story.
You have an amazing way of sharing.
Well done and good luck.
Love
Norms
What a delightful twist on the familiar Bible story. I felt the MC's pain from the very first line. You did a great job of bringing your characters to life. On the message boards is a great thread for all levels of writers called Jan's Writing Basics.
01/30/14
Congrats!!!

God bless~
Congratulations and well done. It was an excellent read:)
Blessings
Norms :)