The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/05
Free verse is not exactly my "cup of tea"...so it's difficult to critique something I cannot understand. So I pass...but did read part of it.
Well, I don't know alot about poetry, but I do know about my Savior, and I know that this bit of verse hit the nail right on the head. He truly is the "Winter WonderMan."

Thanks, and God bless,

Kevin
11/25/05
Interesting and descriptive verse. I liked the poem, but it's a little hard for me to picture Jesus as winter wonderman..(lol) although I do get the point. Thank you for sharing. God bless ya, littlelight