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I have a question in my mind as to what the "before this ever began" is. I assume some sort of financial hardship. Watch punctuation ('I' should always be upper case). Thanks for sharing your story.
Powerful and pentrating entry.Thank you.

God bless~
I like your poem. It reminded me of the old hymn, "Leaning in the everlasting Arms" of Jesus.

Keep writing, you have a good talent.
This is a powerful piece full of emotion. You definitely left your reader something to think about.Check out Jan's Writing Basics on the message boards. She gives great tips for all levels of writers.