The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this entry. It is lovely and flows with ease. Sweet how poetic words paint such a lovely picture here...Juanita Pittman-Brown
11/23/05
The stanzas of your poem that impacted me the most: stanzas 2, 5, 8, and 9, and especially the idea of "the touch of the Master's kiss." A beautiful thought! Your rhythm went off a little in places, but overall this was very nice.
A nice poem. Good job.
Very nice poetic expression of gratitude and nostalgia! :-)
11/25/05
I thought your poem was good that it brings to our remembrence "hope" for the "hopeless" and the opportunity to share Christ's love with others, especially during the winter season. God bless ya, littlelight
Ricky, your poem is one filled with compassion and hope. The last verse is the perfect ending too. I enjoyed reading this very much!