The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/05
A story of the REAL WORLD in poetic form; the reader can't miss the heartbreak of this mother's love. Well done. It touched me deeply.
11/21/05
A story of the REAL WORLD in poetic form; the reader can't miss the heartbreak of this mother's love. Well done. It touched me deeply.
11/21/05
Wow. Powerful and well-written. Made me read it twice, and then a third time.
This is wonderful. Congratulations and bless you for this.
11/25/05
Such is our faith, which is pretty tough to coagulate in the real world. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. God bless ya, littlelight
You've woven a spell with this skillfully written poem! The free verse has its own rhythm that brings your reader into the pulse of this dark world of which the woman is a part and yet apart. Well done! Bravo!