The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/14
I’d love to have your input into the free writing lessons available on the FaithWriters forums. This week’s lesson is on writing devotionals, and next week will cover writing on topic for the weekly challenge. Look for it at http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67, or if you’re on Facebook, you can “like” Faithwriters Writing Lessons.
01/10/14
A truly inspiring poem
Excellent job.

God bless~
01/10/14
I love this little poem.
01/10/14
The title reminds me of a Fernando Ortega song. :) Lovely poem. The fifth verse was my favorite, especially the line about art. That is so true.

Great job and thanks for sharing!
01/11/14
Very sweet--the kind of inspirational poem you might find on a bookmark or a greeting card.

My critique would be that this seems to be more about "morning" than "day's end." Except for the last two lines, it's really a morning poem, and therefore might be rated a bit low for the "on topic" criterion.

I loved the part about discernment of how to cope--something that I certainly need every day.
The last two lines are the 'punchline', per say, regarding the 'Day's End' topic as each day ends after the morning begins and the day progresses and then ending with Christ being the start of the next morn; as He is all aspects of our 'days' :)