The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/05
Nicely written.
Beautiful story. I loved it.
11/24/05
Boo hoo! Very nicely written..what a nice way to tell about their love.:)
11/24/05
Simply beautiful.
Beautiful and so romantic. Enjoyed it. I wondered about the tenses in the second to last paragraph (I was a little confused) but otherwise perfect. Well done!
This is a sweet story... :-)
11/25/05
A beautiful story told in a beautiful way. Good job JP!
11/25/05
Aww - brought tears to my eyes. Very sweet story.
This was very touching. Ed, you are a good writer with God given talent. Quit being so hard on yourself and relax. People like to read what God tells you to write. Keep it up and be encouraged! Happy belated Thanksgiving!
11/25/05
This is a touching story. I like how you brought him full circle in his life. I also like how he honors his wife even after her death.
11/25/05
Awww..so sweet and prescious. Enjoyed reading your story. It was quite descriptive--I felt as though I was there in your thoughts. God bless ya, littlelight
Wow! What a tear jerker! I really enjoyed reading this! Thanks for sharing!
11/27/05
What a wonderfully romantic story! You established the time flow very well. Word repetition (park, etc.) was a little distracting. The ending brought it home. Good job!