The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/05
I wasn't clear on if your thesis was dislike of winter, pagan origins of Christian celebrations, or Jesus conquering fear. Maybe just focus on one of those? The writing itself is engaging and top-notch.
11/25/05
I think it was a pleasant mixture of all the above. Nice points that went all the way and pleasantly weaved throughout. God bless ya, littlelight