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11/29/13
Hauntingly beautiful as the poem closes to the truth of God's love and compassion.

God bless~
This is a true reminder that God will never leave us or forsake us. You did a great job covering the topic.
Wow this really struck a nerve for me. Though it was 25 years ago, it still stings. Everyone told me he was not a good guy, but I thought I could change him. Thankfully God rescued me before too much damage was done. I believe God will use your words to prevent at least one person from going down the road. What a wonderful team you and the Spirit make. God bless.
12/03/13
This hits home with me too. I've felt the sting of the one I loved walking away. Poetry is supposed to touch us on an emotional level and you did that quite well. Good job.