The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/13
A profound story that penetrates to the core of truth. Beautiful job.

God bless~
Filling in the blanks to "the rest of the story".

Many have wondered where Thomas was when he missed the first appearing of Jesus to the apostles, but now "we know".

Very good descriptions of scenes and of emotions.

Sometimes thoughts and ideas just seem to come. These make the story easier to write.

When ideas do come - go ahead and write even though you may never know who will ever read it.
You did a spectacular job of retelling the Upper Room story. You brought Thomas to live and helped the reader imagine what it must have been like for him.
11/29/13
Congrats! God bless~
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