The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/13
Amen & Amen!

Beautifully said and written.

God bless~
11/23/13
I like the nice form of this poem. The second and fourth lines had the rhyming words. (I did not check every verse.)

Getting the rhyming words may take the most time. Good work.

What you write is true whenever anyone believes that Jesus was crucified but rose again and was made both Lord and Christ and repents and is baptized for the forgiveness of their sin, they are a child of God because they were given his gift of the Holy Spirit.

Your poem forms are good and seem to come easy for you. Keep writing in this form, especially if you like it best.
11/23/13
Very touching poem. My husband lived for a year on the streets before coming to the Lord. Sometime we come to the end of our rope before turning to the only One who can help us out of our misery.

Very well written! Blessings!
11/24/13
This is a beautiful poem packed full of emotions and truth. Nicely done.
11/25/13
Awesome job with an amazing message! Good luck on your entry.
11/29/13
Congrats! God bless~
11/29/13
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