The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/13
Excellent writing. The entire piece was riveting and compelling, and the ending in which Christ spoke to the sinner, always makes me cry. Good job with your take on this powerful story.

God bless~
11/16/13
You wrote is such a way that one could feel they were there. Excellent writing, very believable.
11/17/13
Wow! I could feel myself in this man's place and see through his eyes.

Very well written and very powerful story.

Blessings!
11/18/13
This is amazing. Though you never actually mention a "goldfish bowl," it can be seen and felt throughout the story. No better story can be told. You did an excellent job writing this, showing us what your MC was thinking throughout. That's what I call great writing.
11/23/13
I see true talent here - just simply --WOW. Beautiful writing, and totally captivating. I am in awe.
11/24/13
I really liked the angle you used for your story. Especially the MC's viewing of Jesus' approach.
Great job!
11/24/13
Congrats! God bless~
12/17/13
Very creative POV, from a thief who may have been a follower of Jesus at one point, which you have presented very credibly. Well done.