The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a stirring piece that speaks to the challenges of life in this world and the battles many face on a daily basis. So glad it ended on a happy note with your MC being saved and renewed.

For ease of reading, break your writing into two or more paragraphs.
Powerful with an uplifting ending. Thanks for sharing.

God bless~
This reads like poetry. You have some wonderful metaphors in this piece. You used quite a few water words. Next time, try not to take the topic quite so literally. Push yourself to think outside the box. You do have a wonderful style of writing. Your passion shines through. I have no doubt that many will be touched by your words and able to relate.
Congratulations! God Bless~