The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/13
Nice flow and ease of rhyme in this prayerful entry. I enjoyed it.

A tiny bit of red ink:
Give me peace in knowing
my Saviorís what Iíve found.
In this line the word following Savior's should be "Who" ---not what--because it's referring to a person (Jesus), not a thing
11/04/13
Beautiful and powerful!

God bless~
This is a beautiful poem. I ft like you were speaking for me. The message is powerful and one I bet almost everyone could relate to. The rhythm and rhymes felt natural and flowed beautifully. You did a nice job of writing on topic too.

You may want to check out Jan's Writing Basics on the message boards. She gives wonderful advice for all levels of writers and responds to each person who posts on her thread. It's a great resource.
11/07/13
Congratulations! God Bless~