The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/13
That was a beautiful reminder, and a great picture of an important truth. And, I'm glad you got to know Charlie!
10/26/13
Thank you for this tender story. Your segue into the closing and important scripture, was powerful.

I really enjoyed the "voice and tone" on this entry, and it touched my heart.

God bless~
10/27/13
This is a nice devotion. I like how you started with a real life story that everyone could relate to.

I've noticed this quarter that a lot of people are taking the topics literally, thus resulting in quite a few dog stories. On the message board there is a thread called Jan's Writing Basics. She does a wonderful job of helping all levels of writers.

Your transition to your Biblical message was seamless. You made an excellent point without coming off as too preachy. I totally enjoyed this rambunctious dog. I feel like I understand him. Great writing.
10/31/13
Congratulations! God bless~