The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/13
What a sweet tribute to your professor. I hope you locate this individual, maybe you can put a "thank you" dedication in your next book. Seems the professor helped you out considerably.

Thanks for sharing your story...I pray your book soars on to heights of success.

God bless~
I enjoyed this. You did a great job of capturing Ms. National. You had me smiling as I read. Teachers like that are special indeed.

I did notice some tiny punctuation errors that a good proofreader might help you catch. Also check out Jan's Writing Basics on the message board. She has a thread which helps all levels of writers. She responds to everyone who posts. Like your wise teacher might say, "Learning is a lifelong experience."

You did a wonderful job of covering the topic in a fresh and interesting way. I really enjoyed this piece and look forward to reading more of your writing.
10/31/13
Congratulations on your story! I really enjoyed it.

God bless~
Congratulations on placing 2nd in your level and 16th overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message board.)