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10/20/13
That original sin left us all in hot water. You've used a lot of great verses in your message. Your ending sentence made me smile. Thanks for this thought-provoking entry.
10/21/13
This is an interesting devotion. You make some great points that really make the reader stop and think. You did a nice job of writing on the topic in a fresh way. The one thing I might suggest would be to add a prayer at the end. You do such a nice job of backing up your points with Scripture that I think a prayer would be the perfect ending. Nice job.
10/21/13
Powerful devotional that will touch many.

God Bless~
10/24/13
Very nice devotional. You might consider giving one or two concrete examples of how we can act on the truth and reality of slaying one's self, just to help cement the takeaway. Well done!