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Oh I love this story. You pulled me in right away. I had Persians who knew they were special and strutted around the "regular" cats too.

The only red ink I would give is you didn't need the line about curiosity really killing the cat. You showed the reader that with your wonderful words and you nailed the topic in a fresh way.

The ending brought the story full circle. I can only imagine how horrible that must have been for your father. You have a knack for storytelling.
10/21/13
This was so well written, and held my focus all the way through the "sad ending." I was mortified, and can only imagine the pain he must have felt seeing that lifeless image. My heart goes out to kitty kat and your grandfather.

Thank you for sharing.

God bless~
10/21/13
Sorry, I meant to say,
"your father." God bless~