The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/05
What a sweet story. :)
11/15/05
The dialogue was very realistic..I could see myself there. Good story.
I put yours in my top three for this week in the Intermediate category. Kudos!
11/16/05
Well-written piece with realistic dialogue.
11/18/05
I got chills at the end. I could see Virginia running to her daddy -just like our daughter runs to hers when he comes home from work.
11/19/05
This is a realistic and well-written story. The family dynamic was also well-developped. Gret job!
11/19/05
You created a believable sense of place and your characters related realistically in this story. Well done. Yeggy
Congratulations on your "highly commended" for this week. I'm glad to see the judges and I agreed somewhat...although I would have put yours in the top three. But kudos all around!
11/21/05
Wonderful well-written story. Congratulations Kathleen on you Win. God Bless. Helen

11/21/05
A very sweet story that drew me right in. Congrats on your well-deserved placement.