The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/13
Good job with the topic. I was pulled in from the beginning to the end. Nicely done.

God bless~
I enjoyed your story. In the end I had to chuckle. Good job and God Bless!
I think you did a great jpb with this. You made the characters come to life with your dialog. Be careful about not letting the title give away the ending. By making it plural, the reader has a clue that both boys were "bad" Overall though you did a great job.
10/17/13
Congratulations, Ken!
10/21/13
Congratulations! God bless~