The Official Writing Challenge
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09/22/13
You certainly have a way with words and your detailed word pictures are amazing. The message was clear at the end, but up until then I thought you jumped around from one subject to another and spoiled the flow. It may be that you intended to do that to portray your character's scatter-brained personality. (If the M/C is yourself I do apologise. Don't come looking for me! Ha!) On the whole I thoroughly enjoyed reading this entertaining story.
09/22/13
Very interesting take on topic and quite a bit different (at least at the beginning) from others I have read. It covers a lot of bases. Good job.
09/23/13
During the break in the Weekly Challenge schedule, I’d like to invite you to the FaithWriters forums, where I’m holding a weekly free “class” in various writing strategies. Participation is strictly voluntary, but I give free and timely feedback on all contributions. I’d love to have you drop by! http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67
09/26/13
Congratulations! God bless~