The Official Writing Challenge
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This is so well thought through and written. Great job!
09/15/13
So good! Loved it. Thanks.

God bless~
I liked this. There have been many stories this week about Jesus being an expert, but you put a fresh spin on it by adding Satan. Your message really packs a punch. I think you might be surprised if you go back and count how many times you used the word expert. You really didn't need it that many times. Restructure sentences to avoid repeating, but more, have faith in your message. It's possible to write on topic without ever using the topic word and I think you are super talented and could do just that. Your message is powerful, and your piece well-written. You did an outstanding job of selecting the right Scripture to back your points. Well done