The Official Writing Challenge
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09/15/13
This was such a well written story with an amazing message. I really liked the way it wrapped up...a very strong ending.

God bless~
09/16/13
A powerful piece very well written. I was there with you. Thanks for sharing!
This is a brilliant example of how one can write on topic without ever using the topic word. Not only were you an expert on being a cynic, but you sought help from a processional.

You grabbed my interest immediately and held it right through the end. Many parents struggle with the concept of Santa Claus. I took the yes Virginia there is a Santa route and told them Santa was love. It never failed that each year a present from Santa appeared, given to the kids from love, wishing to be anonymous. Your story will mean different things to different people and that too is a sign of an expert.