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09/08/13
This is a creative take on the topic!

I realize the point of this article is to make a point (hehe) about how we live, but it almost comes across that we will know when we will die, and I'm not sure that's what you wanted to convey.

You do make some good points in this, and give some great reminders. Nice job.
09/10/13
Very interesting and clever use of the topic. I enjoyed the message and the way you conveyed it. I read your message living in a world which "has all kinds of evil" and it's up to us to stay within God's graces to be protected from the "world" the ending brought that to life!

Nicely done. God bless~
09/12/13
Congrats! God Bless~
09/13/13
Very clever and thought provoking piece. Nice work and congratulations on your level win and EC placing!