The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/13
I have seen and heard of this before. Good for you that you will probably bring attention to those who haven't heard of it, so perhaps if they see someone with an extra finger or toe they'll understand.

The scriptures tied in nicely to your story. Thanks for sharing this with us. It was very well done, and educational along with an important message.

God bless~
I think this is a delightful story. I was fascinated by it immediately. It made me think of all the babies I helped bring into the world. It doesn't matter what defects we might have, Jesus loves us anyway.

The one thing I might suggest would be to have more of a connection to your Bible message. I liked that you mentioned the giants, but think you might also have been able to stretch it out more. Maybe go into more detail about what the giants did compared with what you do.

I think this is spot on the topic. You really did a nice job of coming up with something fresh and interesting.