The Official Writing Challenge
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08/30/13
Wow - this was an excellent piece filled with emotions, and delivered a powerful message!

Excellent job, and will have us all thinking about future encounters.

God bless~
09/05/13
This is a sad and convicting story. I was a little confused at whether the girl was with the gang boy at the beginning and if the narrator was a boy or girl. Your character descriptions are great.