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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Expose (08/22/13)

TITLE: No Secrets
By Ramona Cook


As Agent 102491 walked toward the door of the room at the end of the huge and impressive corridor, he saw that it was marked, "Supreme Leader."

An empty gnawing panic was settled in his stomach and he felt helpless. He would not be able to answer the questions asked of him.

As the door was opened he entered with halted step, but knew he must "bite this bullet," as it were, and tell The Supreme Leader that he had no answers. In fact he had nothing but reports that were not explainable.

Perhaps he could begin with saying, "My lord, I bring no answers but rather reports that evoke questions."

The Supreme Leader seemed annoyed by the statement, but with a sigh he settled back into his luxurious high backed leather chair and smirked to the Agent to "get on with it."

"Sir," he began, "we cannot find the method by which the enemy seems to always know about our plans."

His department had carefully searched any possible method by which leaks of the secret plans seemed to be continuously happening. This place had been carefully built and inspected for wires, electronic bugs, and personnel that attended the meetings while plans were being made were scrutinized meticulously, but there was nothing; there was absolutely nothing and yet the enemy knew of every plan ahead of its execution.

Agent 102491 reported that he had risked his life by infiltrating the enemies camp and while there in their company he had learned that they almost never physically see their leader, but they talk to him regularly and they hear him reply; he however had never heard their leader's voice.

They had a strange method of positioning themselves when they talked to their leader, he reported to The Supreme Leader, they knelt on their knees and bowed their heads, they called out to some people they called by various names, Jesus, God, Holy Spirit; he had done the same as they had done, he reported, but it was not successful for him, he had heard nothing.

"That is not the only point of concern Supreme Leader, many times they are placed into the prisons into electronically monitored cells, and the next day they are on the streets and no cell doors were opened."

"There are also times when our City Guards have taken aim at them and shot their guns, and the bullets do not strike them; sometimes when one is brought down, another one of their company comes to them and calls them to resurrect, and they do rise up and live."

"I do not know what we deal with Supreme Leader; there are times when our agents are looking at them and they disappear, they just disappear."

"I have seen them walk through walls and run across water."

"They call it living in The Kingdom of God; they say that their Leader rules the Earth, and that their Leader knows every thought of every heart and mind of every person on Earth, and that there are no secrets to be kept from him, not by individuals, nor by leaders of Nations."

"It does seem to be a fact Supreme Leader."

Matthew 10: 26

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Joanne Sher 09/05/13
Fascinating take on the topic - great descriptions. Enjoyed this piece!
Yvonne Blake 09/05/13
What a unique POV about the Millenial Kingdom! Near the end, it was hard to know if it was one person talking or a conversation back and forth - confused me.
Great story!