The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/13
WOW- AMEN! God is amazing, and when that peace encompassed your being, you just KNOW everything is going to be okay.

LOVED THIS. Thank you for sharing this.

God bless~
08/22/13
What an amazing adventure. I know that peace you spoke of and there is nothing like it.

He had others following the boat He was in charge of and so all were saved.

Well written. Thanks
08/23/13
I live just a few minutes from Lake Michigan, so this entry really appealed to me. I think a lot of people don't realize how enormous our lake is, and how dangerous it can be! You captured that well.

Since it appears that you had a few words of your 750 to spare, I'd have like to see some more characterization of you and your family--perhaps some dialog portraying your panic and fear.

Really good story, a fine read.
08/26/13
You did a great job of building toward your climax, it had me hooked.

Thanks for sharing this.
08/29/13
Congrats! I knew this was a winner!

God bless~
Congratulations for ranking 1st in your level and 14 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.)
09/02/13
Oh I know the fury of the Lake and the raw beauty of that coastline well. Great storytelling and congratulations on your level win!