The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/13
Beautiful! I loved the concluding paragraph the most...it said it all. Amen.

God bless~
08/23/13
Your writing is very good, and the encouragement you've given here is spot on.

A minor critique--you wrote of 'shattered nerves' and 'difficult confrontations,' but you gave your readers only hints as to what had happened. If you're reluctant to share personal events (understandable), you could write a hypothetical situation, or disguise your own event with slightly altered details. But readers relate to your writing more if you give them a bit of real-world application.

I enjoyed reading this entry, and hope to read more from you--you have a real talent.
08/26/13
Strong writing, well done.

Thank you for sharing it.
08/29/13
Congrats! God Bless~
09/05/13
Great job JoAnne. JoAnne Billison is a Spirit Driven Author at SpiritDrivenLeadership.org .
She has 3 free eBooks at http://spiritdrivenleadership.org/author/joanne-billison.html