The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/13
Loved it. And, I love rainbows. I just saw three outstanding ones last week within a matter of hours.

Good job, I jumped out of my seat. God bless~
08/22/13
Short, but oh, so sweet. I enjoyed this. Your message of God's protection is a good one and your handled the topic well.

Thanks.
08/23/13
A lovely word picture that appeals to several senses without resorting to purple prose.

I found this perhaps a bit light on topic; 'exhale' wasn't really essential to the story.

You're a talented writer--I'd love to see more from you, using more of your allotted words. When the writing is good, we want more!
08/23/13
Great short. Thank you for sharing it.