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Wow! Most compelling read, and perfect lead in to the need for Jesus. Thank you.
This is a nice devotion. I liked how you started off. It was gross, but it grabbed my attention. I like how you transitioned to the message. The only thing I might suggest would be to explain the bizarre religions a bit so people who have never heard of them know what you're referring to. You did a nice job of providing great verses to back up your message too. Good job.
08/20/13
Amen. Beautiful!

God bless~
08/21/13
Andrew's show is one I try to watch just to broaden my understanding of other cultures. Sometime it is just too gross.

However, your entry is anything but gross. This is a remarkable piece of writing that transitions well to the Word of God and your intended message.

Thanks for sharing.
08/22/13
Congrats! God bless~