The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this. What a splendid idea! I think you nailed the topic and thought outside of the box. The only real red ink I have would be to write out numbers under ten (some say up to a hundred.)You really captured the personality of a worrying mother and wife. I really enjoyed this and think it is one of my favorites so far this week.
Magnificent. Held me throughout. This is a definite winner!
08/20/13
Brilliant! I loved this well written, well thought out, and overly authentic story...Great job!

God bless~
08/22/13
Congrats! God bless~
Congratulations on placing 2nd in your level and 20 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)